"only butterflies remember where blood first touched the flowers" & i had to put my laptop down after that line because u said everything without saying anything & somehow that made it land harder than saying it directly would have. i read this yesterday & i kept coming back to "the city still calls itself kind" because that specific line is doing something that most writing about this moment is naut doing & i do naut have better words for it than that💚 & i loved it💚💚
"Butterflies asked for spring, Bees brought winter" reminds me of "Man Proposes and God disposes", one of the lines from the poem which I have learnt years back.
This might be just another piece of work for many, however, its a reflection of what the common man went through because of this spoilt system. We truly need to be concerned about what's going on in our society.
These lines says a lot, without saying anything in particular!
Sir, this means more than you know. I am glad that this allegory could carry something that is often difficult to put into words and even more grateful that you felt it. Thank you for reading it and for being here💜
"only butterflies remember where blood first touched the flowers" & i had to put my laptop down after that line because u said everything without saying anything & somehow that made it land harder than saying it directly would have. i read this yesterday & i kept coming back to "the city still calls itself kind" because that specific line is doing something that most writing about this moment is naut doing & i do naut have better words for it than that💚 & i loved it💚💚
Thank you so much martha for reading it💜
Loved it shivaay, but i want your poetry collection. So write is fast❤️
still writing andrew💜 thank you for reading this piece.
excited for that shivaay
LOVED IT SHIVAAY ! GOTTA BE YOUR LOYAL READER NOW ☺️✨
This genuinely means so much to me. Thank you for reading and staying💜
"Butterflies asked for spring, Bees brought winter" reminds me of "Man Proposes and God disposes", one of the lines from the poem which I have learnt years back.
This might be just another piece of work for many, however, its a reflection of what the common man went through because of this spoilt system. We truly need to be concerned about what's going on in our society.
These lines says a lot, without saying anything in particular!
Great work as always, Shivaay!
Sir, this means more than you know. I am glad that this allegory could carry something that is often difficult to put into words and even more grateful that you felt it. Thank you for reading it and for being here💜
Amazing… the first and last line has my heart. ❤️
Always the ending💜